From: ching@yabbs
To: Hellion@yabbs
Subject: re: 
Date: Wed Apr 20 18:42:31 1994

I hear ya man on that one. I think your really on to something with this 
poem. Perhaps some toying around with the rythm, meter, rhyme scheme, 
et... would help even more. A very good job as is though. 
ching