From: Cat@yabbs
To: jujubee@yabbs
Subject: re: Feeble
Date: Tue Aug 16 10:05:19 1994
In message re: Feeble, jujubee said:
> do for pleasure apart, then we might wanna quit writing, ya know? So if
> you want your work critiqued w/more *uumph* than w/less smileys, let us
> know! We, the savage sonnet sharks, will be more than happy to oblige!
yeah nat, make sure your tenses are all correct in the mindless poems you
write at 3 am or juju will be sure to point out your errors ;)
you can take the teacher out of the classroom....:)
-tammie
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