From: pixy@yabbs
To: jujubee@yabbs
Subject: re: Feeble
Date: Tue Aug 16 01:02:52 1994

In message re: Feeble, jujubee said:
> It's probably because no one wants to hurt anyone's feelings!  We get our 
> work ripped apart enough in our classes! If ppl ripped our work that we 
> do for pleasure apart, then we might wanna quit writing, ya know?  So if 
> you want your work critiqued w/more *uumph* than w/less smileys, let us 
> know! We, the savage sonnet sharks, will be more than happy to oblige!

Actually, I think we refrain from constructively criticising posts out of
shear laziness. I've tried to constructively criticize, but that means
actually READING and UNDERSTANDING each other's poetry, instead of
skimming over it as usual. 
pixy