From: sienna@yabbs
To: all@yabbs
Subject: On A Sea Shore
Date: Sun Aug 14 05:59:22 1994

Here is another poem I found.....pixy, Nat, pbj, mali...please critique. I 
am going to post it the way it is...but I will work on it and any 
suggestions, likes/dislikes would be much appreciated! *hugs*


On A Sea Shore


Walking through moonlight
Staring at stars I swear weren't there before
Sweating through hindsight
Staring at moons half-asleep on the shore

It's only a mile to where you are going
It's only a mile from everywhere

Dancing on a sea shore
Watching candles burning in the sand
Burning all across the land
Jumping shadows, hand in hand

Dancing on a sea shore
Watching the moon meet the sea
Watching her watch over me
Hiding behind her majesty
On a sea shore

Feel the southwind
Picking me up above the troubles I know
Seeing the sun grin
Evil faces all around the globe

It's only a year from planet earth
It's only a year from everywhere

Dancing on a sea shore
Watching candles burning in the sand
Burning all across the land
Jumping shadows, hand in hand
On a sea shore



Well, what do ya'll think? Comments needed, solicited,
wanted and appreciated!

enjoi,

Dee