From: jujubee@yabbs
To: Charon@yabbs
Subject: re: Charon
Date: Wed Apr 13 00:00:08 1994

final stanza...first line...meter flow not quite even...try to insert 
"myself" between "lay" and "down"...how does that sound to you???
i think it flows more smoothly.....but that's just my opinion....
*wink*