To: trekcreative{at}yahoogroups.com
From: Nehemiah R Hall 
Reply-To: trekcreative{at}yahoogroups.com

Greetings Mr. Smith. You wanted feedback on your stories, and here is my
contribution. What I have seen has been reasonably well written, though I
don't catch much grammar or spelling unless its blaring unless I'm really
scrutinizing. For me, the story matters more. The characters I have seen
have caught my interest, and I do want to know more about them. As for the
story itself, I will need to see more before I render a judgement. However,
you definitely have a good start.

Nehemiah

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