Hi, Anton! Recently you wrote in a message to Ardith Hinton:
AH> Some folks consider it acceptable to introduce a tense
AH> change at the beginning of a new paragraph, but AFAIC
AH> it's distracting & unpleasant. I would suggest you pick
AH> one or the other & avoid changing horses in midstream....
AS> This very morning I have enountered that device in Peter
AS> Taylor for the second time,
I think you mean Peter Taylor (1917-1944), from the US. :-)
AS> but it is the first time that I have found the time (time,
AS> time, time...) to quote it:
Not to worry! I guess folks like you & Alexander are really paying
attention when you ask about something I posted months or even years ago. ;-)
>>> They were on their wa downstairs again now, and by the time
>>> they had finished with this favorite subject the would be
>>> downstairs.
>>> They would be in the dark, flower-bedecked downstairs hall
>>> and just before entering the dining room for the promised
>>> refreshments: the fruit jello, the English tea biscuits,
>>> the lime punch.
>>> And now foor a moment Mr. Dorset bars the way to the dining
>>> room and prevents is sister from opening the closed door.
>>> "Now, my good friends," he says, "let us eat, drink, and
>>> be merry!"
Hmm. Peter Taylor may have considered it acceptable to introduce a
tense change at the beginning of a new paragraph, but I don't see what purpose
it serves here. Miss Langwidge wouldn't have allowed her students to do that.
And WRT the above example I find the tense change distracting at least in part
because... together with the content... it sounds much like what I overhear at
the local pub. I can't help wondering if the narrator had already sampled the
lime punch and if that's the effect the author wanted to achieve... [chuckle].
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