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to: ANTON SHEPELEV
from: ANTON SHEPELEV
date: 2020-04-18 23:44:00
subject: The record shop. Feasibil

Anton Shepelev to Denis Mosko:

> > (a)   An automatic system is required that will give a report on
> > possible storages from a prediction of likely sales compared
> > with numbers in stock.
>
> I don't like `give' without a direct object.

Correction: I don't like give in this context without a second
direct object, e.g.: "that will give the owner a report on..."

Otherwise, I should consider "yield", "provide", or "generate".

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