On 2/16/2020 2:03 PM, between "Anton Shepelev : August Abolins":

 AS> But more amenable to parsing than, say, in M.R.
 AS> James's "Jolly corner":

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 AS> This entire paragraph feels to me like a bumpy road
 AS> whereover one (I) can hardly walk wighout he trips all the
 AS> time and falls often, hurting one's knees. I know this
 AS> sentence is dubious, but plead to Edrawd Albee, who wrote
 AS> (IIRC):

I concur.  That example was brutal! and hard to remain interested in reading.

It reminded me of "stream of consciousness" style of writing.


 AS> A man can put up with only so much without he descends a
 AS> rung or two down the old evolutionary ladder.

That is probably why writers/authors need a good editor/publisher who can
suggest improvements.


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