To: trekcreative{at}yahoogroups.com
From: Garry Stahl 
Reply-To: trekcreative{at}yahoogroups.com

Steve Oostrom wrote:


> To cover their
> butts, they should have let the murder stand and let the real Rafersan
> claim the body and leave with it.
> Instead, we have another stupid, greedy, pair of criminals who try to
> cover up one murder with another
> murder.  Stupid, stupid.
>

Criminals by nature generally are.


> Then they disappear.  How would the
> meat harvesters know the person is a transient who would not be
> missed?  It's possible they could
> mark a person who is on a freighter and who would be missed.  I think
> in short order, the disappearances
> would get Terkos and his people looking at that problem.


Recall the free nature of the Ane Confederation.  Your businessis your
business.  the dark side of this is it makes it easier for people to
disapear.


>
> As for the character of Nardo... exactly what is that and what is he
> trying to prove?


Have you read "The Duel"?  That will explain Nardo.


> On the
> other hand, the story could use another editing pass.

I never claimed editing was my strong point.  Be my guest.

--
Garry   AKA   -Phoenix-   Rising Above the Flames

Star Trek le mort.  Viva la Star Trek admiraetur.

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