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Hi, Shalanna. --- Shalanna wrote: > Hmm. What Fang said is all true. Well stated! Thank'ee. > Nowadays > critiquers generally fall apart if you write, "she said tensely," > and they > insist you must instead of the adjective insert a tagline "showing" > how the speaker is tense. Yeah, I do that. Well, I don't fall apart. . . . > MN>Just try to picture Yoda talking in Noam Chomsky's grammatical > form. > > This gave me a headache. A headache me this gave. Alack! "A headache does this give me; hmmmm." > >You've got to keep in mind, Lynn, that when someone says "This > thou > >shalt not do in thine writing" they are usually making a Grand > >Proclamation based solely on their prejudices. When some dolt > says > >"your writing sucks" it's not that your writing sucks: it's that > he > >doesn't get the point of the story and such a one never assumes > >that's because he's too dense to get it. > > Exactly! (Stolen for quotes file. In fact, you ought to stick > that in the database, Fangy.) Done. At least it's saved away for later filing and uploading. ===== Did you ever hear anyone say, "That work had better be banned because I might read it and it might be very damaging to me"? --Joseph Henry Jackson >From the Lair of Fang-Face DreamWeaver and The Encyclopedia Michael Nellis http://www.angelfire.com/scifi/dreamweaver/index.html __________________________________________________ Do you Yahoo!? The New Yahoo! Search - Faster. Easier. Bingo http://search.yahoo.com --- Rachel's Little NET2FIDO Gate v 0.9.9.8 Alpha* Origin: Rachel's Experimental Echo Gate (1:135/907.17) SEEN-BY: 633/267 270 @PATH: 135/907 123/500 106/2000 633/267 |
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