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Okay, so. After I finish the Camille paranormal, I'm going to write a ChickLit book. They don't really require any plot of any kind, and they're all rambling-like, just like my normal style. So this should be perfect. But I did come up with an opening paragraph, effortlessly. What worries me is that it might be a quotation from something I've read, because it just poured out. And seems too good. I thought I might post it here and see whether anyone recognizes it, and whether it would be any incentive to read on. Considering this is supposed to be fiction, humorous, women's stuff, that is. If you've read _See Jane Date_ or _Confessions of a Shopaholic_ or one of those books, you know what I'm aiming for. "My life is filled with little rituals. I don't know when I invented them, or even how; I simply know that I do them, even if I don't always rationally believe in them or that they work. One ritual from childhood is to count to four or eight or a multiple thereof while chug-a-lugging water; another is to put my hands on the ceiling of the car whenever I'm going under a railroad track with a train crossing it. But the most powerful one is to do something selfless, something selfish, and then a random, anonymous act of kindness, in that order, within a span of forty-eight hours. "This is the charm that heals, I hope. This week the ritual started when I gave away my place on the train to a kid desperate to get home on time. Then I indulged in several scanty bras for no reason at all. As for the third, it has to stay anonymous for the magic to work. And I need some magic in my life right now. As do we all." There. Isn't that sounding a lot like something that came out of . . . I don't know where? So far, though, Google searches haven't turned up anything. I think this could be a cool Chick Lit (Red Dress Ink) sort of book, and it's obvious it'll be based on and circle around rituals, the little rituals of the day and the year and the life that keep us going, that keep us grounded, even if they don't work and we don't even consciously believe in them. The rituals that comfort and guide us and give our lives structure. And then there has to be "the hump or the heat," of course, as it is vulgarly stated about "romance" and women's fiction. We'll see. Just thought I'd gauge reaction here. Shal - - - The only thing that flies faster than an F-16 is your guardian angel - - - - Nine out of ten doctors recommend reading my books. The tenth is a quack. Shalanna Collins http://home.attbi.com/~shalanna/> _Dulcinea: or Wizardry A-Flute_ (e-mail me 4 excerpt) ISBN 0-7388-5388-7 New! I'm trying out a blog/jrnl http://www.livejournal.com/users/shalanna/> --- Rachel's Little NET2FIDO Gate v 0.9.9.8 Alpha* Origin: Rachel's Experimental Echo Gate (1:135/907.17) SEEN-BY: 633/267 270 @PATH: 135/907 123/500 106/2000 633/267 |
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