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| subject: | RE: [writing2] Theme (was: The writing life...) |
> Theme is a tricky beast to define. In my upcoming (next > week!) booklet > on writing short stories, I tackle the topic thusly: > > Theme > > This short book on short story writing shall end with > perhaps the most > difficult topic to dis-cuss. What is theme? [...] The explanation of theme comes in the second half of the booklet, which covers aesthetics (rather than mechanics). The aesthetics section is introduced as follows: The Aesthetics of Short Story Writing "And how are you now, Professor?" the Empress asked, bending over the invalid. The Professor looked up, and smiled feebly. "As devoted to your Imperial Highness as ever!" he said in a weak voice. "All of me, that is not Lumbago, is Loyalty!" "A sweet sentiment!" the Empress exclaimed with tears in her eyes. "You seldom hear anything so beautiful as that-even in a Valentine!" -Lewis Carroll, Sylvie and Bruno Concluded Beyond the mechanical issues of short stories are the aesthetic considerations. When one speaks of character movement, or theme, one is entering less clearly charted territory than when one speaks of point of view, dialog, and tense, and indeed, aesthetic issues are less easily defined, but are of critical importance in serious fiction. First, let me explain exactly what I mean to do when I hold aesthetics up as being something different from mechanics. Aesthetics are about the beauty behind a story, and by beauty, I do not mean prettiness or preciousness. I consider Camus' novel L'Etranger (The Outsider) and Knut Hamsun's Sult (Hunger) to be aesthetically pleasing novels, but neither is about anything particularly pleasing to the eye or senses in the way a bucket of ice cream on a field of fresh grass on a hot summer's day might be pleasing. These novels are pleasing because they examine human nature carefully, honestly, and do so in a way that is enjoyable, in a very broad sense for me to read. In short, they are aesthetically masterful works because they are, in my opinion, beautiful art, even in light of their subject matter. Well-orchestrated mechanics are a large part of literary aesthetics, but they are not enough unto themselves. The most brilliantly turned phrase, most authentic dialog, and the most tightly knit plot, without much under their surface to say to me as a reader, are like comparing finely polished glass to finely polished diamond. A quick jerk of my mental hammer will shatter the glass, but do little or no harm to the diamond. A work that is perfectly executed, but has nothing of merit to say-a piece that puts form before substance-is, at best, a temporary joy. Works that dig under the skin of the human condition by exposing genuine and meaningful character movement, speak to humanity through theme, evoke timeless allusions, and leave me with more understanding than before I read them, however, even if they are not perfectly executed on a mechanical level, are something to behold. The ideal, of course, is to produce works that are both mechanically and aesthetically superior. I consider Hemingway's "A Clean, Well-Lighted Place," to be just such a short story. I would like to point to one of my own short stories as an example of such a work, but in all honesty, do not feel that anything I have written has reached that mark yet. I may never be able to reach that mark, but I can still strive towards that end as a short story author. -- Quinn Tyler Jackson --- Rachel's Little NET2FIDO Gate v 0.9.9.8 Alpha* Origin: Rachel's Experimental Echo Gate (1:135/907.17) SEEN-BY: 633/267 270 @PATH: 135/907 123/500 106/2000 633/267 |
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