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from: DALLAS HINTON
date: 2016-06-28 05:01:00
subject: C.S.Lewis `How to Write`

Hi All!

A colum from www.io9.com:

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Writing advice from C.S. Lewis was both adorable and concise On June 26, 1956,
author C.S. Lewis responded to a fan letter from Joan Lancaster, a young
Chronicles of Narnia enthusiast.

In a personalized thank-you letter, the writer imparted some simple and
valuable stylistic advice for budding prose writers. Behold, how to write like
Aslan. Lewis began his correspondence by provided pointers on literary matters
both existential...

If you become a writer you'll be trying to describe the thing all your life:
and lucky if, out of dozens of books, one or two sentences, just for a moment,
come near to getting it across.

...and grammatical.

There are no right or wrong answers about language in the sense in which there
are right and wrong answers in Arithmetic. "Good English" is whatever educated
people talk; so that what is good in one place or time would not be so in
another [...] Don't take any notice of teachers and textbooks in such matters.
Nor of logic.

But the true pith of the letter came when the author offered five easy tips:

1. Always try to use the language so as to make quite clear what you
   mean and make sure your sentence couldn't mean anything else.

2. Always prefer the plain direct word to the long, vague one. Don't
   implement promises, but keep them.

3. Never use abstract nouns when concrete ones will do. If you mean
   "More people died" don't say "Mortality rose."

4. In writing. Don't use adjectives which merely tell us how you want us
   to feel about the thing you are describing. I mean, instead of
   telling us a thing was "terrible," describe it so that we'll be
   terrified. Don't say it was "delightful"; make us say "delightful" when
   we've read the description. You see, all those words (horrifying,
   wonderful, hideous, exquisite) are only like saying to your readers,
   "Please will you do my job for me."

5. Don't use words too big for the subject. Don't say "infinitely" when
   you mean "very"; otherwise you'll have no word left when you want to
   talk about something really infinite.

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Cheers... Dallas

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