Jan wrote:
> In article ,
Wayne Dernoncourt
> says...
>> On Mon, 19 May 2008 15:28:45 -0400, Jeffrey Kaplan wrote
>> (in article ):
>>
>>> Previously on rec.arts.sf.tv.babylon5.moderated, Christina Wilson said:
>>>
>>>>> Zack was watching Lyta leave in "Objects in Motion".
>>>>> I am not quite certain if the boy friend was watching or the
>>>>> security chief or both.
>>>> I always thought it was both.
>>> IMO, it was Zack Allen, the person not Zack Allen, the Security Chief.
>>> If he were there in the capacity of his job, IMO he'd have been visible
>>> and "official looking", possibly with a couple of
security troops with
>>> him, rather than hiding behind some crates with a wistful look on his
>>> face.
>> That's what I thought.  Did anyone see any mention of that in volume 14?
>>
> 
> The draft of the script chosen for the script book doesn't feature Zack in the
> docking bay.  In the shooting script I've got, there are a few additional
> sentences on that particular page:
> 
> Just before Lyta says that they should be off, the script says:
> 
> 
> 
> Then a bit later after Lyta 'smells another book coming' the shooting script
> says:
> 
> 
> 
> Those two additions added a sadness to that scene, I think.  First, Lyta really
> wished that somebody'd cared enough to come and say goodbye and then Zack who
> did care but couldn't, or wouldn't wish her well as she left.
> 
> Jan 
> 
> 
Zack may have considered talking to Lyta too dangerous.  Lyta has been
kept in maximum security.

I also noticed the Sheridan did not tell G'Kar to look after her; that
I did expect.

The other group missing were the businessmen Lyta worked with every day.

Andrew Swallow
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