Hello Danny!
DC> On 20 Jun 04  19:47:55, Dmitriy Repin got back to Danny Ceppa 
->> Re: Poem: your opinion

DC>> Poetry is quite a bit different than reqular writing.  

DR>> In russian - regularly.

DC> Do you mean that it is regularly different? 
If you mean not this poem, but poetry - Russian language is great and
powerful, as our writer Gogol said, and there are better conditions for
really beautiful poetry. It has larger vocabulary than many others. But
Russian is more difficult to learn, than many others.
This one and other poems I posted here are the experiment.
I looked at english and spanish poetry and saw different metre (in the same
poem) and bad rhymes (in some poems - almost no rhymes) and I asked
yourself:
"maybe this languages are not comfortable for writing? If I'll be able
to write (technically) better without knowledge of languages - so, these
languages may be used for much better writing poems by their native
speakers, than they do. So, they are very lazy people"
Russian poets use to write in the regular metre, with regular rhymes.
If you speak Russian, I can send you my russian poems.
Can you name me any echo for american writers? or can you send me an
american echolist, because I'd like to improve my English, but found only
MOSCOW_OKLAHOMA.
Do you know any american esoteric/magic echo? There are some in Russia,
there must be those in USA.
Are american people intrested in magic, yoga and self-perfection?

Best wishes!



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