On 18 Jun 04  22:14:27, Dmitriy Repin got back to All 
-> Re: Poem: your opinion

 DR> How do you find this? Do this resemble English?
 xx>                       |Does  

 DR> Is it noticeable, the author isn't a native speaker?
 DR> (Looking just at the poem?)

 DR> If you find anything incorrect, or ugly, tell me, please.

Poetry is quite a bit different than reqular writing.  

In any event, I think you did well.  


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