Amber G Lance wrote:

> You're uninvited
> And yet
> I let you stay
> reliving the past
> With a look
> The tears
> starting to fall
> in my heart
> You're uninvited
>
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Yes, isn't the whole world 'univited' at times. I like the 'tears
starting to fall in my heart',
however, I might try 'collect in my heart', or 'pool in my heart'.

John