-=> Quoting BARBARA SHAFFERMAN to JAN CHANDLER <=-
BS> Scattering the dialog like that might work very well. There would be
BS> suspense generated by not revealing the whole conversation right away.
BS> It has to be handled well, but could be very effective.
Yes, that's the germ of the idea I'm getting.
No major rewrites of stuff already written and it helps string the
reader along.
... "42? 7 and a half million years and all you can come up with is 42?!"
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