"JWB"  wrote in message
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> "John Royer"  wrote in message
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>>
>> "Jon565"  wrote in message
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>>>
>>>> But it wasn't "obviously" an opinion. You
wondered what is wrong with
>>> the
>>>> men of that age group. Not some of them. Don't leave it to your
>>> audience to
>>>> figure out what you're trying to say.
>>>>
>>> It was obviously an opinion and obviously a generalization.
>>>>
>>>> > It doesn't improve clarity and this isn't exactly
formal writing.
>>>>
>>>>
>>>> Agreed it's not formal writing, but yea, saying what you mean does
>>> improve
>>>> the clarity.
>> And once you are absolutely clear and succinct, they'll find another
>> reason to discount what you say.



> How about being clear and succinct first.
There ya go, the first idiot replies.




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